All Comments on 'The End of High School Ch. 02'

Your writing is good, but your stories are a bit extreme on the unbelievable side. The percentage of 18 years not having sex is pretty low, so for the mother thinking her daughter is having sex and telling her to wait is not a very realistic scene. Unfortunately, this lack of reality is a bit of a turn off. The mother talks / treats her 18 year old daughter like she's 10 years old. If you could make the relationship between the mother and daughter more mature, the story would be more believable.