All Comments on 'The End of Our Trip'

I love how you incorporated multiple fantasies into one brief tale (public nudity, public sex, sex with strangers, the adult bookstore, threeway, glory hole, interracial girl-girl), and there is something insanely hot about the idea of a wife/girlfriend willing (indeed, eager!) to fulfill all of her man's wishes, no matter how wild or risky. Editorially, the story suffers a little because of abrupt changes in verb tense and some missing punctuation. Lusty little Suzi is such a perfect fantasy girl, though, that the grammar & style issues seem minor in the final analysis. Great work!