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All Comments on 'The Ends of the Earth'

by maximoparkch

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rachlourachlouover 17 years ago
i enjoyed it -

it was beautifully written and definitely erotic. It deserves a much higher rating than it currently has.

Lurk_deLurk_deover 17 years ago
Got a good feel to it

hope you continue the story

Lurk_deLurk_deover 17 years ago
Got a good feel to it

hope you continue the story

janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
Liked your style of writing...

It was almost poetic...

I hope you write more.

janiexx

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Sorry

Sorry - it was boring and predictable. What was erotic about it?

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Your story

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread on the Lit forum (Author's Hangout).

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