All Comments on 'The Enemy Who Loved Me'

waiting 4 2nd part

Awful spelling.

Enough said... some would mistake the 1 in k1 for I add mie sounds like kimmy, simply imPossible.... ;)

Did you just not want to have to right the legal disclaimer and right a Kim possible story.

A cute, thiugh at times silly, story. It's even sort of sweet, and definitely sexy but, again, all that is spoiled by the absolutely awful writing.

I Love the fact that this is a veiled Kim Possible lesbian story. And it was Great. However you should have a proofreader/editor. There are quite a few mistakes that if avoided would have made the story a lot better.

Keep writing.

Lol that was an interesting take on Kim Possible. Much approved..