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All Comments on 'The Eternal Kiss'

by MsVixen416

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lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
nice story

nice story... just a bit skimpy on the sex for my taste... all allure and not much wooarr!...well written though... well done

michchick98michchick98over 15 years ago
Not a bad effort!

A little confusing, I think it could have used more background and descriptions, but not bad otherwise. Good luck in the contest.

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