All Comments on 'The Ethereal Plane Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good Story

I liked the premise of this story. I hope you continue and that the manager realizes the wisdom in hiring only black men to service these lovely women. My only criticism is that you should have spent a bit more time describing the massage and teasing us before you got down with that wonderful interracial sex.

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