All Comments on 'The Eyes Have It'

Really all I can say is WOW, this was excellent! It got me so hott, I had to start playing w/ my pussy. I've never been ass fucked but this story made me want to try it. Great Job steve w!!!

A deliciously exciting and evocative story. Well written and damn sexy too.

Thank you for a wonderfully told story. It was intense, erotic, sexy and believable. So many stories are just too way out there. This one I can see actually happening and that makes everything more enjoyable. One of the few short stories to get me wet.

Great story, and truly erotic. Hoping for a sequel.

very sensual stuff, goood characters, hot sex.

This is excellent. Great story idea, well told, good pace, vivid sex, and excellent editing. The only things I can say are positive.

Write more because you do an excellent job.

These two have such chemistry! Go on!:)

Very well written. The situation was credible and the writing flowed. It was easy to read despite a few less commonly used words used appropriately.

Great story Steve!!

Oh for an encounter like this one, well written and hot.

Keep writting stories about anal sex like this one and more

people will come to enjoy it..

A great hot story. The world needs more writers as good as you. Thanks for taking the time and effort to be an author.

you have a great talent as a writer, this site needs more people who are skilled at actually writing a good story rather than just getting down their fantasies. i hope to see a sequel soon! oh, and more details of the anal sex would be nice- those descriptive words always do it for me!

There's got to be a continuation to this. You've started to develope two interesting and delightful characters that deserve more story time.

This story was so believable. Well written, easily read, held together well and the characters alive. I really enjoyed it from the start to the very sticky end. Please develope these two in further stories. Thanks.

It was a great story, that let you get a feel for the characters from the very beginning, and actually drug you in so you felt like you knew them more than you would characters in other stories. I loved it and am hoping to see more of Mikey and Laura. Keep up the good work.

Really great read! I'm discovering my anal side and this story left me excited for more. Keep up the good work!

Much better writing than the norm here. Believable characters, fantastic dialogue, and for once I wished it would happen to me.

More of Mike and Laura please.

So wonderful, so sweet!

Sexy