by angelmaven69
@redlion75, You may be right about that, I'm new so i'm still trying to find my footing. I actually thought about switching it to Erotic Couplings, I guess i'm confused about the category because he's human but she isn't. Do you think I should just switch it to non-human? I really appreciate the feedback, thank you.
REALLY Great story! And as for the categorizing, I think that is up to you and where you take the story.
I'll be looking for it no matter where it's posted.
Categorizing it as Non-human would pretty much give away the end, which should be avoided in this case.
Non-human would also have caused a lot of readers (myself included) to take a pass on the story, which should also be avoided whenever possible. I'm glad I didn't.
Erotic Couplings was the right choice since it was the major focus of the story.