All Comments on 'The Fall of Angela'

I skipped most of this story, and as for the future of this story, I hope I never know it

No ideas, no imagination, lack of ability to express feelings.

I liked it. I would have liked some sloppy cunt licking on Angela's part, however. I would have enjoyed reading the description of Miss Kate fully in charge of Angela's desperate need to lick Miss Kate's vulva then slurping her vaginal secretions oozing out of her fully aroused cunt. Lez scenarios are very erotic when done well.

Where,how and why does she have this need for an 18yr old girl?us not knowing the ending shows you don't know it either.

it reads like it was written by a male, and that's never good for a lesbian story