All Comments on 'The Farm Ch. 01'

Guessing the doc has a smooth voice, deep blue eyes and short, dark, wavy hair.

And the slow service clerk is lil sis.

nice start i can see this turning into a good long story.. now weve got through the obligatory descriptions lets get to the content looking forward to the next episode

You write very well. As more comes out in this story, I will know the extent of your D/s knowledge or training. Very well told so far. Anxiously waiting for more.

5 stars.

Hopefully this is going to be a good series. Naturally I like the heroine very feisty so will no doubt be due a few spankings. I do love funishment. Hmm I wonder if there will be a love interest and who?

Thank you all! The story takes somewhat of a turn in chapter 3 (pending) and yes there is punishment coming. Thanks for taking the time to comment and share your thoughts!

Usually I just read short clips of things on here just to get off and thats what I was doing when I found this. It was a chapter somewhere in the middle and after I finished in knew I wanted to read more partially because its so hot but also because its well written and is an amazing story. Now I'm binge reading beginning to end lol please keep up the good work you're an incredible writer!!!

Well written. I guess I live a sheltered life, thinking that women treated like dirt won’t get off, but what do I know?.

too much story. not enough sex

Nice.

Agreed with Nitro70652, refreshing, you know the difference between a skave and a submissive. Good stsrt on the D/s. Looking forward to more.

Yes OneThird there is an entire sub culture like this.