The Flower Girl Ch. 01

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Now she lay panting again, staring outside at the stranger, who had watched everything. She'd seen him and watched him ceaselessly near the end, unable and unwilling to do anything about it. She just watched him watching her, as Mr. Gairden violated her sweet, shameful ass, and she came for seemingly everyone's pleasure, the stranger's, Mr. Gairden's, and her own.

As before, once they were done, the man simply turned and went on his way.

* * *

Yuuka listened as Mr. Gairden pulled up his pants and buckled his belt behind her. She stayed where she was, letting him admire her tormented ass as he dressed. She imagined it herself, with his cum glistening on her skin. Her asshole must look raw and open, eagerly waiting for more. She felt dirty, and pretty, and content. And she was still hungry for more.

The sound of the bell at the door told her he had left. She didn't wait. She immediately stood to look at the counter top, where another hundred dollar bill waited for her.

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sartorialgentsartorialgentabout 4 years ago
Very evocative

I keep coming back to this story every couple of years or so. Strong imagery, and very compelling to me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
My Cock is Hard

Amazing writing, exquisite sex, great story, certainly a nice read. My cock is hard!

isubmit2uisubmit2ualmost 12 years ago
WOW!

As much as the words frightened and excited me as I read this tale of manhandling, I longed to be Yuuka with a man as skilled as this - a man that was capable of taking total control. What an education she is getting and I greatly anticipate reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Touhou?

awesome

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
you

How I wish I could be yuuka

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Re-read

As you said in your bio, "You re-read the ones that you like. So I have done here. I do not have the expertise to write such a story, but never the less enjoy them. I commented on this story and others of your creation that they are among my favorite. That has not changed.

In the 60's there was a saying, "Right on". For you the way I would put it to you is "Write On!"

sexysmilesexysmilealmost 16 years ago
Enjoyable

The slowly revealed details about the characters were nice. Something about this "gentleman" rubbed me the wrong way, but readers don't have to like your characters in order for a story to work. I liked Yuuka and would like to read more about her.

stevaroonistevarooniabout 16 years ago
Subtlety, domination, and textured characters

These are the defining aspects of your craft. Very descriptive and momentous. You're definitely getting more skilled. Even in three pages, the lack of a detailed plot hasn't gotten boring. The details spatter in, slowly. Groovy.

Busy_Mom_Of_8Busy_Mom_Of_8about 16 years ago
Amazing...

I loved this one. Once again, you have created real characters. I love the fact that "Flower" is so innocent that she doesn't know what she likes.

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