by Tarakin
You did a wonderful job with this story. It was very well written. The descriptions were great and the story unfolded perfectly. I hope to see more submissions from you. Keep up the great work.
This was a really beautiful story. I loved your depth of characters and the innocence of the girl.
I really enjoyed this. Very erotic and arousing. The ending sets it up nicely for a sequel and I hope you'll be writing one.
slope of confusion and indecission. Sounds like a young girl trying to figure out the difference between love and lust and losing the battle.
Very well written. Please write a sequel. It was very erotic and arousing.
Really liked this story although the last paragraph about the wedding was a little unexpected.