All Comments on 'The Forbidden Flower Ch. 02'

I enjoyed this chapter to the story even though I am not the biggest fan of lesbian action. The animal/woman was a nice touch and added to the sensual nature of this chapter. The surrender of the chosen female was very well done. The only problem I had was a few mis-spelled words and they caused a momentary pause in the flow of the story. These mis-spellings were the type that would pass the spell checker so careful editing is needed. Otherwise very good and my tastes concerning female/female sex do not reflex those of others. Keep up the good work.

Okay, your story is crack and I am the world's biggest crack whore! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Awaiting the next instalment and all the other chapters. Given it is implied that Alex is British given his dress style, the spelling should be English not American. So colour should be spelt correctly. Should he undress, he would remove his trousers then his pants, at which point he would show his cock.

I wonder when the story will continues, the great and interesting story, a supernatural burlesque performance. It would be great to see more mythical creatures be introduced into the burlesque performance.