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All Comments on 'The Four Freshmen Ch. 01'

by Jason_NYC

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RespairRespairover 12 years ago

Look forward to reading about Barbara!

blue_eyed_dudeblue_eyed_dudeover 12 years ago
Eagerly awaiting Barbara

Very nice first effort, well written and detailed. Can't wait to see how you handle chapter 2. Thanks for the read, I was sad to see you have only written the first chapter. Will be watching for the next chapter.

sleeplessgurlsleeplessgurlover 12 years ago
Keep going!

Hey Jason! Thanks for favoriting my stories. That's how I found you. This is a really good first story. Well written, with a nice easy pace and cadence to your prose. The only thing I would suggest is having someone proofread for typos before you post chapt 2. There were a few, but not enough to turn readers off. :) If you need an editor, inbox me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hurry

Looking forward to reading about Barbara

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Inspired by many late nites on Literotica, I decided to try my hand cobbling together some erotic recollections. Your rants, raves, constructive criticisms, and dinner invitations will be deeply appreciated. --Jason