All Comments on 'The Freedom Ch. 01'

I can only call it as I find it.

Of all the stories I have read on Lit,com, THIS one gets my Golden-Turd award. Sorry that I read it, had it been tagged better, I wunt have!

Fantastic! I'm looking forward to reading all of your stories.

...though the tale has been oft told I'll check out the continuation to see if you manage to pull a new plot out. Good luck!