by iman2
Don't listen to people who don't give background on what makes your stuff shit or amazing unless they specify what exactly about it makes the writing positive or negative from their perspective as a reader.
Come on Dude !
There's a lot of girls to convert to the Freshman massive tool...
Last roomates, other friends, teachers,..
Keep on writing Amigo for your and our pleasure.
Make more to the story man there the hottest ones I've read yet I want u to keep writing.