All Comments on 'The Fruits of Their Labor'

by SultryCitizenne

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Austin8Austin8about 15 years ago
Al Gore...I get it.

Well written, maybe could have tied the body of the story to Earth Day a bit more though. Good Luck in the contest! A8

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What is Earth Day? Don't know but I loved this.

Great story. Great use of language - and the action was as good. Encore!!

PrincessErinPrincessErinabout 15 years ago
Sexy

Great story with a lot of hot and steamy sex. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Huzzzah, Madmoiselle Citizene!

Wow. I could feel the rapture of both the lady and the two gentlemen. Exquisite!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love your stories

Evocative imagery, believable action and a touch of humor all combine in this short but wonderful story.

You are an excellent writer and this reader hopes that you'll keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Go Green for Cock!

I would remodel my house in an instant if this was the result! Great story!

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