by driphoney
I always say (as long as there isn't any broken bones, after we were finished, then it was just normal crazy.) Thanks for the post......Rich
The author needs lessons in and to learn grammer. Such junk as "Honey ..., hon ..., oh, god, ... I'm ... ah... mm .." is nothing but a waste of space and bandwidth and voids rules of decent grammer even a grade school student wouldn't.
Now that's a fuck!! Broke the chair? Fuck it buy another. Great work.
Very erotic, sensual. Loved the emotion and intensity of the piece. Nicely done.
when critically commenting on the work of others be sure that you do not leave yourself open to criticism also - GRAMMAR not GRAMMER. To the author - good writing, keep going.
You described it in such a beautiful fashion. Loved the ending, but seriously more couples should try the 'chair'. It really is a great place for sex.
A most delicious tale. Your ignorant critic isn't even worth commenting on. Hot and compelling.
This is a truly talented writer who, also being a conscientious writer, is open to criticism. But there is no need to take what is a well-written story and degrade it, as has... oh, shall I say... Anonymous, who apparently is some supposed self-thinking expert that has neither the balls nor the estrogen to identify themselves, or themself, has.
I edited this story, and enjoyed doing it. If you have a problem with my style, I encourage you to contact me so that such an interaction may help improve my abilities. I have no "college" and only promise stories I edit for will be accepted, and I have not gone wrong on this promise.
Your expertise is most in need, I know I am only a stopgap waiting for "real" editors like yourself to respond.
And if you don't have the courage to "step up", then "shut the fuck up".
The gauntlet has been laid at your feet. Put up or shut up. Don't mean to sound hostile but I'm tired of Anom yahoos shaking up the pot and doing nothing.
WHich are you?
That was delicious!!!!! I'm sending this link to he who I fuck by phone. To hint at what is waiting on him...
I felt like I was reading an excerpt from my time with him.
LOVED it! Love your work...
This is sooo good! Nice job and what an imagination. Keep them coming. I truely love this author. Kodos
Wow! This story blew me away. Hard to find stories in this category with such hypnotic rhythm and torrid pacing. It started with steamy eroticism and built from there. Really excellent work! Thank you.
never a chair. God, I'm dying to try! Nothing better then upright full frontal chair sex. Love your work Driphoney!
But I liked it! That was damn creative and one hell of a way to suck your audience in. Not sure how that classes...1st and 2nd? But it was well done and as far as I could tell kept steady throughout. This might be a good piece to submit to Playboy or Hustler. Don't know what their word requirement is but you should really look into it!
I really enjoyed this. I was able to picture it very easily, and it fit to my own first apartment.
My wife and I had a swivel rocker that we used many times for our lovemaking. We nearly wore that old chair out. Several times my wife wanted to throw it out, but then we'd make love in it again--and she decided to keep it. Loved your story--it brought back many great memories.
I have spent the last couple of months reading some very long drawn out stories here on Literotica. Today, just as in real life, I thoroughly enjoyed a quickie.