All Comments on 'The Fugitive'

by JANAMARIE

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very good

Very good story, well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
well rounded

Thought this was a well rounded story. Liked the fact of a plot to go with some arousing sex. Enjoyed this tremendously.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A Damn Fine Story

JANAMARIE"

It was an easy, smooth read, and an interesting one. Good work. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great writing

The flow of the story is very smooth and I completely disagree with the bit of criticism that the sex apppeared too quickly. After all they guy is old and he doesn't want to wait around for it!

Janamarie, keep up the great work. We need more stories like this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
endings...

loved the story...wished the ending was developed more.

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