All Comments on 'The Game'

There should be a split in this category, and this story perfectly illustrates why. Superb story!

to discover a well written, interesting and real-seeming story. Great job!

Slow, effective buildup of tension before a great release. Very nice!

The teasing, the flirting, the sexy banter . . . made this well written story very erotic. Nicely done!

even if the unwilling accepts the inevitable. TK U MLJ LV NV

I enjoyed every sentence. Very erotic.

...told in an appealing way. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing it. 4*

Easy to understand and identify with the two of them. Plenty of background on them in brief intersperced phases and sentences. Realistic by play and flirting. This is a complete short story so thank you for not damaging it with a sequel . . .

The next day the cramps start.

Orpheum69