All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Masters and subs aside

I keep wondering just what type of master would wnat to permanently break his wife's will and in this case some others parts of her. Wouldn't a dovorce be simplier? If he is looking for a damaged, brain dead wife; enough blows to the head would be enough.

My guess is he would dump her and change subs once she permanently cracks, "I always admired her spirit". A true relationship would be bending not breaking. A broken sub or wife would violate the masters taking care of and keeping his sub from permanent damage and certainly violate his marriage vows.

This master deserves neither a sub nor a wife.

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
wonderfully done....

and i believe that he isn't asking for broken in terms of spirit only in terms of submission and for her to reach within and find the inner self that she's not allowed to be touched by anyone...not even husband/Master. she said she wouldnt beg...she begged...wouldn't cry...she cried...can't wait to see what is next. Thank you for the reminder of a few things that have seemed so long ago aquired but so long ago lost. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Ouch!

I think the fact that she hasn't ended the game means she's as into it as he is; and he didn't say he wanted to break her, just that if she kept resisting and didn't just quit he would.

I can't wait for chapter 5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Speechless

Speaking from experience, I know exactly what the sub is going through. See, she refuses to end the game because of her stubborness. At the same time, she wants to please her husband/master, and wants his constant approval despite the intense pain/pleasure. Thus is one of the traits of sub. Personally, I can't wait for chapter 5!

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