All Comments on 'The Garden'

A great story, much more natural than the authorised version. Keep on.

you have done a great job! Very unique. Must read more please keep writing as you have hit on a very interesting way to sum up the existence of us all

Of course, we know the rest of the story. Hopefully, chapter two will have them doing it like puppy dogs at a picnic under that peach tree the very next day. Excellent start of a very long book Chapter one was a winner. Give us more...soon. Please! Wild Bill

Another Adam and Eve Story. Genesis redefined.

Much finer then most of the stuff you read on here.

You can't get more "First Time" than Adam and Eve. :D

Great story

Nice story! Her hymen isn't buried half a dick in though, lol, try right at the top blocking the fun hole! Hehe.

Very well done. I wish I had written it.