by Friendly Dragon
Romance and sensuality all in one story. Wow, hopefully you will write more soon!
it would be great to have a sequel and continue this great story..
I enjoyed it immensely... You have everything that makes up a good romance, drama, intrigue, and a lusty man to encite a woman's desire. Great job.
I really enjoy the tone of this story. It's like the sizzly part of a romance novel. ;) I'd really love it if you continued with this!
This was excellent,,but it needs to be longer,really,..its not done yet,,,,it just begs for more,lol,,,,,
Amusing and hot, but a bit shallow for my taste. I think you wrote it that way on purpose, though, so I don't object. :P
So he could rape her, dressed up as romance
Sorry but romance is about the wooing and mutual coming together
Should be in the non-consent/reluctance section.