All Comments on 'The Girl from Nepal Ch. 07'

But I wish it were a bit longer. Update soon, please!

for our sakes. The best writing, like the best art, is that which is true to yourself. Write what you want, if people don't like it they'll look elsewhere. But chances are, what you write that's true to you, will strike a deeper chord with others than anything you pull back from. As for sodomy, threatened or otherwise, if it's what the story needs, then go with it.

Another wonderful chapter. It was rough but still very good.

I liked it! Please more! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks!!

Yes, there is a rough section but it illustrates just how

evil those Starklin rulers and their minions are. BES has

a fascinating past and who knows what future? I think some of the twists and turns are creating a GREAT story!

THANKS D.T!

This is a great story; please give us more! :)

Enjoy all your work! Really enjoyed this story and especially this episode, the darkness gave it a nice edge, gave the queen and her advisor extra evil. Look forward to reading more.