All Comments on 'The Girl I Wanted To Bed Ch. 02'

I'm so happy there's another chapter! I'm also so happy to read with this narrator. I know some comments on the first chapter said Rylan's a real asshole, and I agree, but he's also got a charm to him that keeps me heavily involved, and I love it. Jenna is also a great match for him, and I'm super excited to see where they go from here--ESPECIALLY here where the chapter leaves off.

He is an asshole and I'm done!

Rylan is such an ass hole he should go fuck himself and Jenna is awesome

I found the twist where he did NOT hire her refreshing. It is expected that he would try to be close to her and continue contact so that he has a chance to worm his way into her bed, her life, and maybe even her heart. Ignoring the small issues due to lack of thorough editing, I highly value your creativity and rated this story "5".