All Comments on 'The Girl in a Pooh Bear Night Shirt'

Yes, what happened to the long version of the story? Why did you print a short story?

What happened to the long version of the story? The time they had a nude picnic up near a lake.

This is imho your best story! Would love a follow up.

Great story. Would love it to be continued.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!

RecHiker

I agree with the other anon. What makes this story a success is the voice of the narrator. You captured a sense of individuality, a personality, a very tasty mix of shyness, self-awareness, curiosity...

Nice set up. The narrator's voice was good. It would have been cool if she initiated another session with George after Tom finished, it would have made her more of an active participant, which is where I like these reluctance themed stories to end. Very good effort. I enjoyed this. Hope there's another chapter out there in the wings waiting to be written.