by Xtinas_Girlfriend
I gave a 5 to part 1. How can I give a 5 to part 2 when it is so much better than the first?
Not better in style or quality - those are consistent. The story just seemed to develop smoothly and came to an equally smooth conclusion.
One question: I'm male and know nothing about female relationships, so is it usual for Ashley to continue to greet Lauren casually as though nothing had happened? I know men can't do that. Can ladies compartmentalise relationships so easily?
I really loved this chapter it was much better Bravo ,Bravo
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga.
life is precarious nobody can get away with it,yet thanks for they find love with each other again and this time it will be for keeps.(cinder)