All Comments on 'The Gold Digger'

by carvohi

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Yes

Yes dude yes. Well written and subtly erotic then fucking sexy. If you aren't continuing this storyline consider writing anything with beautiful single/married women in nc/reluctant scenarios like this. You do it well. Prepare yourself for the lecturers who will say this belongs in either nc or bdsm categories but who cares. Just keep writing them and I'll be reading. Thanks and very good start out of the gate.

silentsoundsilentsoundalmost 7 years ago
More rape and enslavement?

This sucks.

Marklynda2Marklynda211 months ago

The best laid plans of mice and women, often go awry! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

godawful.

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