All Comments on 'The Good Book'

The approach is different and I was enjoying it very much till like many of these guy authors he had to get into the anal stuff

I gave it a 1 then

This is a very arousing story and I look forward to the next installment.

jhkhkj

The novelty of your approach was quite refreshing, thank you.

Don't worry abut the detractors. It was good, and the transformation he went through was well done.

BUT IT COULD HAVE BEEN GREAT.

Why did you spoil it with the hint at swinging or swapping?

Same boring old cliche when an author runs out of good ideas for a story. All the guy had to say was it wasn't the book he meant, but he was happy for the mistake, then they fuck again. No need for the swapping shit then.

Otherwise a great story.

both sexy and loving, and with a fun twist at the end.

I enjoy your work very much!

ohio

always fun to see the god squad exposed. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

I love erotic comedy, and this is one of the good ones.

THE Mystery of the name of the book, or confirmation of the subject, totally detracted from the story. Then it is so wordy, why say what you can in ten words if 3 paragraphs is just as good? -- lost interest. Good Descriptions, and like the style but in desperate need of a rewrite. What was the name of the book?