All Comments on 'The Good Citizen'

Be a GOOD CITIZEN too and write quickly.

LOVED IT !!!!!! Please continue soon

Brilliant, I hope you continue with this as a series. i particularly like the element of mystery that is running through it.

Very , very good! Write on!

A person dedicated to Japan and it's culture running 3 "chinese" restaurants, I think not. Other than that, not too bad at all.

That story was a filling "meal" for my imagination. I ate well. Please continue to write and continue this story-line.

Try taking your time. And don't use the same word twice in the same sentence if you can avoid it.

Fun story but agree with the comment below-- Chinese restaurants and a Japanese elder????? Also the banker should have asked a couple questions-- terms and length of the loan to be a little more believable -- I doubt a "banker" would be so willing to transfer such a large of personal $$$ out of the country without some initial info exchanged.