by carsonshepherd
I can't believe it took me this long to read this story. I love stories like this and keep looking for them. I'm still in shock that I just discovered your writing.
More please?
That was such a great story. Wow! I want to laugh and cry at the same time. Just outstanding. You make me fall in love with your characters. You draw me in to their lives, their worlds and their hearts. You're an amazing writer! Please keep writing for us... Please?????!!!!!!
A great story. You make that saying that you can't go home is bull. It is interesting that Sean and Louis found eachother after years of being apart. It makes one believe in fate
You weave such beautifully believable characters into interesting stories. Love your writing, Love your insights, Love your heart!
This was a great chapter - thanks for poignant and insightful dialogue that causes us, the readers to reflect and reevaluate our own ideas and beliefs. I agree you, you could take the story of James Sean and Louis to so many new and exciting heights. Would love to read more. It's our loss that you haven't added more in such a long time.
Every few months I come back and re-read your stories. If you're still visiting Literotica, please know that you have fans who miss you and want you to write for us again!
You are a very talented writer and I love all of your stories.
I am re-reading your stories here on Literotica. I read them all a few months ago, and I found that I've missed you.
Please write again!!
You really are a very talented writer. I hope you managed to get published, because your stuff is some of the best on here.
The whole story i think is well written but i would of like to see more of sean's lover when he was 17
awesome job, totally loved it, soo brimming with love, not just hot sex! i hope louis and the guy, sorry, i can't remeber his name, but i hope that they do stay together...anyways, can't wait for more of your works to come :)
What a beautifully sexy, sweet story. So, what town do these guys live in? I definitely want me & my boyfriend to hang out with them :)
Wow Carson,
A beautiful ending, although, I didn't want it to end. You have so much talent it makes me jealous. I wish I could write half as well as you do. I'm sure I'll be reading this series over and over. Thanks for sharing your incredible talent. I can't wait to read the rest of your submissions.
Wicked
A very erotic, kinky end to a well written series. Thanks, Carson, you are God's gift to Literotica!
(fanning self!) Super sexy action along with a very sweet and believable romance. I absolutely love Sean's dirty little secret. What are the chances of another chapter?
Again, i must give you credit for how wonderful you write. You bring out depth of emotion from your characters that is often missed in much erotica, especially gay erotica in my experience. Its that depth of emotion as well as the fun kinky and hot sex that draws my attention, maybe even more, to a good story. You're writing style is perfect, i love your description, choice of words, and believable dialog. Truly, a wonderful addition to the Literotica family. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!