by dkbeasley
There are some sexy senior citizens and many women who like to see guys jo. This situation is good fun for everyone.
Don't be concerned about trying to write as a man. Your writing has a delicate touch most men would not possess and is thus all the better for it. :)
Really enjoyed it. It is amazing how sexy older women can look. Sure their tummies lose tone and breasts hang lower but they are still beautiful, especially when they have a little confidence
The topic is out of the ordinary -- and definitely arousing. The structure of the story is excellent with a good flow, starting with a slow build-up and then pulsating with peaks and rests, each new peak a little higher.
I assure you, I'm a man, but I totally forgot early on that the author is not. (I presume she is a woman.) So that is definitely not an issue for this author.
I'm looking forward to a series.
I loved the story and hope you continue it, I really want to see where it goes.
A superb story, superbly told. I'm looking forward to reading more about Colin and his friends and imagining myself in a similar situation.
Thank you.
Nick
A good story about older ladies that still enjoy sex. Although a bit shy, they aren't afraid to enjoy some play time. It would be fun to get caught like that some time!
I lovely well written erotic story.
I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially as the topic
is one of my sexual fantasies
Do keep writing
Graham
Great story very erotic and sexy I must admit I loved jerking right along with Colin thinking of Fay and Dorothy
What a superbly written story. Erotic, fantastic and sensitive.
I wonder how many ladies would like that to happen to them. My guess is many.
Thabnk you.
I loved the slow buildup! I'm pleased to know guys can be turned on by mature gals!
Let's have more like this! This 87 year old guy in Oregon loved it..Thanks
Amazing story. So well written and so erotic and sensual! One Million Stars…
Oh the memories! Like so many have eluded to I suspect there’s many a female who would enjoy watching! I got caught once jerking by an older lady while attempting to flash two younger ladies! The look on her face was priceless! Against my better judgment I later returned to the scene. She was there and, after a bit of anxiousness on my part, I jerked off for her again… and again! I think we both enjoyed it as much as the characters in this story!