All Comments on 'The Guest Room'

by Paul_Chance

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
RubenesqueAphroditeRubenesqueAphroditeover 11 years ago
Hot

This was hot. I'd edit anytime. I'll certainly not criticize anonymously, either...

MeredithEighty8MeredithEighty8over 11 years ago

I loved it and look forward to more of the same. I liked the flow, is this based on fact?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Edit Please

misspellings and changes of tense were too distracting. Edit your stuff more carefully.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userPaul_Chance@Paul_Chance
Possessed with a vivid imagination and a love of the written word. Friendly, outgoing and drama free.

story TAGS