All Comments on 'The Hand That Rocks The Cradle'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice start, should have been finished

If you would have finished this story it would have been great. As is, it's a story without an ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You read my mind!

This story reminds me of my fantasies. I have wanted to do exactly the same thing with many of my neighbor's daughters. Please continue.

PassionatePattyPassionatePattyover 15 years ago
Nice but needing an ending!

I really enjoyed this, but why did you rush the ending??? There is so much more you could have said. This was lustful and tender at the same time. A first timer for her and his opportunity to be "that one"...

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