by Phrenetic_Ice
If you would have finished this story it would have been great. As is, it's a story without an ending.
This story reminds me of my fantasies. I have wanted to do exactly the same thing with many of my neighbor's daughters. Please continue.
I really enjoyed this, but why did you rush the ending??? There is so much more you could have said. This was lustful and tender at the same time. A first timer for her and his opportunity to be "that one"...