All Comments on 'The Hand That Rocks The Cradle'

by Phrenetic_Ice

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PassionatePattyPassionatePattyover 15 years ago
Nice but needing an ending!

I really enjoyed this, but why did you rush the ending??? There is so much more you could have said. This was lustful and tender at the same time. A first timer for her and his opportunity to be "that one"...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
You read my mind!

This story reminds me of my fantasies. I have wanted to do exactly the same thing with many of my neighbor's daughters. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nice start, should have been finished

If you would have finished this story it would have been great. As is, it's a story without an ending.

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Former journalist, truck-driver, actor, salesman, firefighter, marketing manager, teacher, author - currently publisher of business cd-roms, my life's resume is covered in the fully dysfunctional autobiography "Cool Among The Flames," (Amazon) https://www.amazon.com...