The Harem's Lessons Ch. 03

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Ariya's back was against the wall, eyes like a frightened deer's. She had left her only weapon in Lokti's chest and now she was at the mercy of the sword-wielding stranger.

He jumped over Salk's body to rush to her, but when she backed away cautiously he stopped. He pulled the hood of his cloak, which concealed his face in shadow, down to his shoulders. The fire caught the blue of his eyes, making them reflect an eerie glow, like a cat's. But in those eyes was a mix of horror and concern. Nothing Ariya had ever anticipated seeing from Captain Cayn Greynon.

"Ariya..." He said, but his voice was distant. Consciousness abandon her, and the last things she felt were his arms, catching her as she fell.

***

The sun woke Nelana gently as it seeped in through the large windows that she loved so much. She sat up and reached to the ceiling, feeling the delightful rush of awareness brought on by the morning's first stretch as her back elongated. She could hear birds singing outside, and rose from the bed, wrapping her robe around her, to open the doors to the balcony. The morning air rushed in to meet her and Nelana drank deeply of it's sweetness. The courtyard was empty except for the birds.

"We overslept, my love, breakfast is being served in the Great Hall, no doubt." Nelana walked back into the room, "My but you sleep like a log. I know that you don't want to miss breakfast." She sat on the bed next to the General, "Wake up, my darling," And stopped...

She had not noticed the absence of his snores, nor the eerie stillness with which he lay on the bed. His flesh was cold to the touch, and as she looked in horror at his face she saw that his eyes were not closed in sleep at all. But open, and staring with the final gaze that meant the sleep of death.

Nelana screamed.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I don't understand ...

... why Ariya didn't demand her freedom in return for helping Bael with his negotiations? That would seem like a reasonable deal to me, especially since she does not want to be his slave ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wonderful

Great story, I can't wait to read the next installation. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
awesome!

you are a very very skilled writer!!! can i take this moment to beg for ariya to not end up with lord bael? i like how you've created his character - how his actions with wren and the washerwoman make him pretty despicable, but then his affection for his "menagerie" of women makes him likeable...but i still don't think he's the right person for ariya. please please let ariya be with the Captain!

Littlest_TerrorLittlest_Terrorover 17 years agoAuthor
The wait is almost over...

Thanks to everyone for your wonderful feedback. I am pleased to inform you that Chapter 4 is about halfway finished, and should be ready to post within the next week or so. It has been a long time coming, I know, but I am getting into the really exciting part of the story and as I almost finished Chapter 4 I decided I wanted to go a different direction and deleted most of it. :D So, hopefully the new version will be as well-liked as Chapter 3.

Thanks again and stay tuned!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
More Please

Loved it, please write more!!!!!

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