All Comments on 'The High School Class Reunion Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice & Classy

I appreciated that there was warmth, affection and even respect in the way the Horse Johnson dealt with your wife and you. It was nice that even while she was getting in touch with her "inner slut" neither Johnson nor you insulted her by calling her a bitch, whore, etc. This is the way more of these "sharing the wife" stories should be...keep writing.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Nice and Steady

The Screwing of the Sweetie by the star athlete, heavy-hung ladykiller progressed at a nice, steady pace. No interruptions, just a little concern that everyone in your old class would know that the Horse had bucked again ... this time with YOUR Sweetie. No seduction to speak (or read) of, just a superior male exercising his 'droit de seigneur' in due time and with appropriate vigor and frequency to convert another vulnerable female to eternally worship at his massive missile! GMAFB!!!

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 11 years ago
HOT!

I loved this story.

Perhaps, anonymous shouldn't read online porn?

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
A nice follow up to the first chapter.

A nicely done, well written and edited erotic story.

Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Yes this is cuckoldry! Just because he is willing doesn't make him any less of a cuck. In fact in my book it makes him more of a pervy cuck. This type of behavior is a fetish! Or do all you guys know a bunch of people who like to be cucks so it is normal in your world? I didn't think so! Definitely a FETISH!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
this why my wife does not

to her reunion... she could not keep her panties on....

1jbm1jbmover 10 years ago
Very good story

I read both stories and enjoyed.

I am writing with a hard cock, and wish there were other chapters.

I fantasize this to be my wife, and wish I could have had the view he had of the last encounter. On of my favorite fantasies.

Thanks for a well written short story, and keep up the writing.

Joe

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Love this erotic scene

Great descriptive writing and a totally plausible plot line. Well written with nice profiles on the participants. Keep up the good work, Jack. I'm loving your slutty wife. Wish you could post photos here.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110over 6 years ago
Hot Wife #2

Incredibly sexy woman, and an very lucky husband. Are there really wives like that? I want one.

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Wanted to see

Wanted to see if this was as silly as chapter one. Even worse. So bad AB didn't like it either.

StubbyoneStubbyone6 months ago

Wow ! A 10 inch Louisville slugger with an apple sized head being stuffed up her ass and almost no pain or discomfort ? There we go again suspending all belief. Come on. The chances of even knowing someone with a dick that big is close to zero, much less hooking up with them. I have to believe your stories would benefit from more believable characters who possessed maybe 7 or 8 hard inches. Also the narrative style of writing is really hard to pull off. Having said that I liked this more than chapter 1. Gave a 4, with grins.

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