All Comments on 'The Hike'

What a GREAT story! I loved it .. .Can't wait to read more ... The pace was perfect, and outdoor sex is awesome ... Thanks for the great story!

It was easy to identify with the story for me. I'll leave it at that before I end up writing my own version in this comment block. Thanks for sharing it. I fully enjoyed it -- hopefully as intended.

Still one of my fav's.

The dog was a nice touch.

I love the location and playing outdoors ... I felt right there with you, you told the story so well ... thanks!

Just read your story, I enjoyed it very much. Can't wait to read more of your stories

Left me breathless.

I sure did.

Great story. I had a good time editing it. Sounded like a lot of fun to me.

Because it was written from the point of view of a woman, that makes me think it was written by a woman. I favor erotica by women, generally, because I can learn things from that other point of view.

It comes across as pretty submissive, with all the name calling. I LIKE the idea of a woman acting the slut, as a game. But, I don't like to think of women as sluts in reality. I don't want to involve myself in sex with someone somehow less than me. In this story he catches her masturbating, and treats her like a tramp. Sexy, but I didn't like him, didn't like him treating her that way. To each his/her own.

Let's hope you didn't get anything else from him instead.