All Comments on 'The Hike Ch. 04'

Maybe I missed it in previous chapters but she forces him to use a condom so when does she get pregnant?

This is now like two disparate stories pasted together. 1*

Gordo, thanks for reading. During the hike, after Becky returned to the tent, Allen ravaged her without a condom. Sorry if you missed it. There are several details there that I felt clearly showed he did not use a condom. Becky actually commented on the fact immediately after.

Please keep reading. I have the last short chapter ready. There's no sex but Becky will be in character once more and Allen may surprise you.

You just threw it out there that she's pregnant and massive toward the end of this chapter. There was nothing wrong with her getting pregnant from her activities as I'm sure she didn't use a condom with Jeff either. Even pulling out could have still got her pregnant. But that should have been mentioned as a fact that she found herself pregnant shortly after the trip. It shouldn't have just been thrown into a scene unexplained. It could have even been worked into the relationship tension of is it his or...? JMO

Thanks for responding.

Very well written and enjoyable. Some might not 'get it' but it has to be said, above else the writing is good. I like the flawed characters and the way the story doesn't go the way anyone expects. Oh, and she must have got pregnant from that one night when Allen got rough and took her hard in the tent? Either way, very hot story Imma give you that!