All Comments on 'The House Sitter'

by phoenix_ray86

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walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 17 years ago
Great little story!

Good job! I really enjoyed this! Keep up the wonderful work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Good story, but

it isn't really an interracial story - there is just one mention of her being black at the beginning and nothing else. You need to talk more about the coloring of her (and his) body and other racial characteristics to emphasize the contrasts.

Girls_cum_firstGirls_cum_firstalmost 17 years ago
SEX, what else is there?

Great story, turned me on no end. Keep writing please. If you like a long romantic sexy story please read how me and my boyfriend Tom met on the beach when we were with other partners

Love Sue xx

AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
Mmmmm, yummy.

I simply loved your short story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Unless the house has a million dollars in gold

Why the hell would anyone need a sitter for an empty house for 5 hours? Who watched it before she walked up and why?

SerranoirSerranoirabout 15 years ago
Wow

MORE .. WANT MORE ..what happen next.?

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 13 years ago
Hot!

Nicely done. Good story.

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