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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
HousEkeeper

Nice Title Editing!!! Spellcheck

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
To good.

To good to be true and had to be pure fiction - but wishful thinking and a very cute short story. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Spellcheck? We don't need no steenkin' spellcheck

For a woman who'd give me that for breakfast, I can put up with a spelling mistake or two. LOL Great story :)

don87654don87654about 15 years ago
Doctorate?

It looks a little more like she might be going to stay with you and make you a Daddy and herself a Mommy, as I did not catch any birth control being used and it looks like she will be sleeping every nite with her pussy full of your sperm?

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Like to talk to both men and women about erotic writing. I am always looking for people to help me edit my work and welcome input about spelling, punctuation, syntax and the general readability of my stories. Right now, (June 2013) I am doing research for the stories I write ...