All Comments on 'The Hunters Ch. 03'

May the stick up his ass be a venimos snake ready to strike.

BTW, I like this story so far, but are the were and this vamp going to get together? I ask becuse thats how I'd write it...

I wasn't expecting another chapter to be out this soon. I was excited when I saw it. Your writing style is great, and I can't wait to find out what happens.

I really thought I'd be upset to leave anya and logan but I have to say i really like kyros though it's horrible he took two years of her life...You really could go so many ways! i mean the irony of a hunter being with a vamp. I would say you should try to give us more details like what a hunter is...i assume they're vamps engineered not to have a smell. Clearly Kyros' uncle is a loser to let his nephew be killed...who are the elders? are they vamps..that is another thing i hope you explain and why could he have had kids but richard couldn't? is richard a regular vamp or a hunter? If you clear up a few things for us that would be great but I really do like where you're taking both stories. Hope to see more soon

What a wonderful story but I was wondering, are the females vampires or just hunters with special abilities. And oh I hope to see more about the elders.

Thank you so much for your comments, interests and suggestions! Haha. I'm trying to work on incorporating all of these into the next chapter. The next chapter's still in progress and should be out by early next week. =)

but not about the hunters. Still curious about them.

i cant wait to read the next chapter

This pov because u didn't start like this. Keep to anyas pov piease and not aruora and the vampires. I want to hear about how it's going for Anya and the were wolves instead.

Enjoying this story!

"He was going to erase her memory of him and instead, incept a new conjured memory of him as her husband." I died at this lmao, man you one kick butt of a writer...read the rest of your work and hadn't read this lol, enjoying the beginning of it all, keep writing and keep up the good work

This story keeps getting better and better! I'm in love with Kyro!!!