All Comments on 'The Improbable Adventure Ch. 01'

This story has a good start but is incomplete- I hope there's a sequel and we find out who the fuck the armed strangers are...

You've got my attention!!! First chapter read very well pace was nice. Looking forward to more now!! Hopefully you aren't doing make us wait too long between installments? So take it away author I am but your humble follower! Thanks for a great first chapter. Five stars from me!!!