All Comments on 'The Initiation Ch. 01'

by AlspethDelArbol

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LadyPartsLadyPartsover 11 years ago
Oh my!

This will keep my naughty fingers busy all day. I eagerly await further installments.

Excellent story, congrats on your first submission. Well done.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
Everything that LadyParts said --

-- with sprinkles ;) ! What a wonderful, naughty, knickers-wetting story! Thank you for writing it and bringing it to us! Welcome - five stars.

MaynessMaynessover 11 years ago
Great Start!

What a scintilating story, very yummy! Looking forward to where you go from here. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Your stories are damned appealling.

But a little convoluted. Hard to follow. The plots do not follow logically.

Fun stories, though.

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