All Comments on 'The Initiation Ch. 02'

Stop writing while you are behind. You need to train something, buy a dog. If others were to know of your actions, you'd be in jail for the abuse and torture of another human being. Even for fiction this is ugly. And if it's a fantasy, you should seek help.

wicked. wicked. wicked hot.

for more! Intriguing storyline -- would love to see where you take it! Interesting characters and action. Take care and have a great new year!

Thanks to everyone for the feedback. I really enjoy reading everyone's reactions. It's so interesting how one person's pleasure can be something another person has no interest in. But,that's the cool thing about BDSM -- as long as it's safe, sane and consensual, you can enjoy your kink in whatever way you please!

I love writing challenges, so if you all have a particular form of pleasure you'd like to read about, feel free to message me and I'll try to work it into a story for you :)

I do not get the attraction of prolonged orgasm denial. It would just make me angry!

Another good chapter. He's established his supreme control over her but if he denies her for long, this reader will not stick around waiting.

Spent too many years in a marriage where my pleasure was never a consideration so I simply cannot tolerate tease and denial.

Wow, great second chapter! Thanks.