All Comments on 'The Inspection'

by sweetleaf1

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

The descriptions were very good, i loved the detail, the dialogue wasn't my favorite, it was too fake porn-esque but apart from that it was great and i shall be bookmarking this!!!

sweetleaf1sweetleaf1almost 10 years agoAuthor
Thank-you for the input!

:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Quite a trip through fantasy land.

A well written and overall great story. I enjoyed it as much as "Iced" (same author).

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