All Comments on 'The Jack Off Sessions Ch. 05'

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Big JayBig Jayalmost 12 years ago
Sensational

Wish you would write more often!

dlakedlakealmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for the comment! I'm going to set aside more time in the next few months to finally finish up this story. I've had it all planned out for quite some time now. I just need to flesh it out and make sure it's satisfying. I do appreciate the feedback though. It's hard to tell what i'm doing right, what people like, etc. So, your feedback is very much appreciated.

dlakedlakealmost 12 years agoAuthor
Edit

I misspelled a word near the end. After they cum on her, as they are watching her, it should have read, "Writhing on the floor, her fingers slid over her body, mixing their seed, bringing it to her lips, spreading it all over." Writhing, not writing. Sorry about that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
pleeeeeeassse

Come on u have got to update:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Suggestion

I think they should do more (I mean Brent and James) with each other (more than only jacking off together).

dlakedlakeover 11 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments. I'm working on finishing this at the moment. I hope to have it done soon. I appreciate the input, I'm sure you all will be pleased where this story goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
:(

i've been waiting so long....i neeeeed this story

dlakedlakeover 11 years agoAuthor
Another Edit

At the beginning of Part 7, the line, ""Fuck, you guys. I am so horny. You probably think I'm a total slut." is said by Allison. Sorry.

Also, I'm writing the next installment as we speak. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ashley:)))

When will the next one be out? Can't wait

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ohhh come on!

Seriously. I've been waiting forever....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love it

Please have the guys jack each other for at least one of the girls, would be even hotter if they tasted and sucked each other too

wdbtchrwdbtchrabout 9 years ago
Driving me wild

Really enjoying this storyline. Love the mixing of straight and gay tones. Looking forward to more. Soon?

maddictmaddictalmost 6 years ago

Good series if your looking for sex. Good girls amd boys. Jennie your time will come and come, I had hoped you would be discovered

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Jack off

Very good series,have read all of them and hope you continue your writings.I like these open stories and personally think there is lots of this going on,although I was never that lucky in my days.I do enjoy jacking off reading them...keep up the good work!

RobJasperRobJasperover 3 years ago
Going great!

Going great! Love the progression of the story line and the graphic descriptions of the hot physical bodies and sexual experiences. Hot hot hot!

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