The Jake Chronicles Ch. 09

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3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Get a good editor

Very difficult to read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Jake try to be real

I used to enjoy the Jake series. I know you can do better. Jake needs to develop an understanding of these women. Jake you demand too much. Real women can't over turn their lives just for your ego. I hope that the writer can understand the conflict he or she brings into their lives. I usually rate these stories high. I can't say this is a great story only a story of domination. It is hoped that future Jake stories will have some compassion.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Still lacking

You might want to find anohter editor.

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