All Comments on 'The Journey'

by Blackman1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Not bad

Cool Story. I like it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I only read a few paragraphs, looked like it might turn out to be an interesting story, then the 'long disked' guys showed up, wearing GAS MASKS, somehow, when a guy talked, we saw that he smiled. we saw a guy lick his lips. THROUGH THE GAS MASKS!

Not good continuity.. I stopped then.

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