All Comments on 'The Kidnapping'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Word choice

Please, it's "throes" not "throws"

BaalabassBaalabassover 11 years ago
Great Twist!

The husband was in on it? I never saw that coming!

jejonesjejonesover 11 years ago
interesting

Baalabass please tell me u r being sarcastic, I saw that coming since the picture scene, then again I read all kinds of crazy stuff, but even though the ending was obvious to me it was still a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ending is Disappointing

Very nice story, sort of diluted by the ending. Still quite well written. More soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
help

Get some editing and proofreading help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
And Of Course

that "Great Boss" will sharing her in no time at all.

melsdadmelsdadover 11 years ago
Great Story, loved it

As I read this story I suspected the ending, but I didn't care, because the story was still very hot.

Usually the only thing I see cumming when I read these stories is myself, lol.

Thanks for your contribution.

melsdad

OneShotOneOneShotOnealmost 11 years ago
good

but predictable.

josephstevensjosephstevensalmost 11 years ago
Too Nice!

Lovely sexy story...but they were too nice to her for any other ending! Good arousoing tale! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
not so good

A good idea, but after that ...

the conclusion is quite obvious and there is none SM, neither at the photographer....

wanderinggipsywanderinggipsyabout 7 years ago
such husbands fit best with super bitches and whores!! super unmanly!!

such husbands fit best with super bitches and whores and definitely not with such a pretty wife who risks loads to save him from his set up kidnappers!! definitely she loves him like hell !!

and all coz he thinks he must cure her from what he thinks as being a stick in the mud when it comes to sex!!

super unmanly!!

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